Are you proposing to copy-edit the blog post? If so, this is kind and much appreciated :-)

If you have a GitHub account you can directly edit the content through the following URL, and propose your changes.

> https://github.com/oncletom/oncletom.io/blob/master/source/_...

No git account so will just post it here.

No major issues with your communication, just obviously not English as first language.

OK, here is the first 40% of my (light) edit of the original post. This took about 90 minutes which is longer than I thought it would. The rest can be done Sunday...

OP: is this too far from your inner voice, what you intended? Is the edit worth finishing?

I'm having to link to the text file as HN says the 1200 word extract is too long.

Markdown

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/8403291/Dijiwan-rewrite

Formatted to 55 col

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/8403291/Dijiwan-rewrite2

PS: I need to sort my editing tools out! I just used two plain text editor windows side by side and it was clunky.